THE PERSON WHO I REALLY ADMIRE IN THIS WORLD

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(Theme: A person you admire)

THE PERSON WHO I REALLY ADMIRE IN THIS WORLD

How many person we admire in this world? Absolutely, we have more than one person who we admire. But, there is only one who we really admire in this life. May be some people should agree with me. The person is our parent. If some people admire artist life more, it is still low than we admire our parent. In specifically my father who always drives me to strive to become a person who able to help them in material and love. My father is 62^nd years now.

My father is a person who has the good characteristics of body. He has tall body around 174 cm, so some people in the village called him “lamp post (Tiang Listrik)”. And he also has strong, firm body. So many people who have not known yet about him, they will consider that my father is one of army. My father also has handsome face with rectangle face, pointed nose, big eyes, big ears, and thick eyebrows.

Besides, he has attractive personality. Not only he is kind of as a paterfamilias, but he is friendly. Either his children or grandchildren almost like more to gather with him than our mother when we come together in our home. Not only that, he is also kind of his friend. This matter can be seen by when he is in home, so many people comes to his home to have a chart to him. When he became a leader of BPD (Badan Pengurus Desa), he has good relationship to the subdistrict head, a leader of DPR or legistilative assembly and the regent of our regency. So our village’s helping is received well by them. He is not stingy father especially for me. When his children or grandchildren ask him some money to buy anything which they want, my father will give it as he still has it as. But, sometimes he shall be angry to his children or grandchildren who are asking money to him when he does not have it.

Besides, my father is a hard worker. He always goes to garden of coffee almost every day to look for money to our need. Even though he is older now, but he is still spirit to work. This matter he does only to drive his children seem to the others.

My father is so kind of me. That is why I really admire to him. Not only he is kind of me, but he is kind to all of people who recognize him.

ANALYZING THE TEXT
Title	:	The person who I really admire in this world
Topic Sentence	:	1.     How many person we admire in this world? (Paragraph 1) 2.     My father is a person who has the good characteristics of body. (Paragraph 2) 3.     He has attractive personality. (Paragraph 3) 4.     My father is a hard worker. (Paragraph 4) 5.     My father is so kind of me. (Paragraph 5)
Supporting Sentence	:	1.     Absolutely, we have more than one person who we admire. But, there is only one who we really admire in this life…. (paragraph 1) 2.     He has tall body around 174 cm, so some people in the village called him “lamp post (Tiang Listrik)”. And he also has strong, firm body…. (paragraph 2) 3.     Not only he is kind of as a paterfamilias, but he is friendly…. (Paragraph 3) 4.     He always goes to garden of coffee almost every day to look for money to our need. … (Paragraph 4) 5.     That is why I really admire to him. Not only he is kind of me, but he is kind to all of people who recognize him. (Paragraph 5)
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Identification	:	How many person we admire in this world? Absolutely, we have more than one person who we admire. But, there is only one who we really admire in this life. May be some people should agree with me. The person is our parent. If some people admire artist life more, it is still low than we admire our parent. In specifically my father who always drives me to strive to become a person who able to help them in material and love. My father is 62nd years now.
Description	:	My father is a person who has the good characteristics of body. He has tall body around 174 cm, so some people in the village called him “lamp post (Tiang Listrik)”. And he also has strong, firm body. So many people who have not known yet about him, they will consider that my father is one of army. My father also has handsome face with rectangle face, pointed nose, big eyes, big ears, and thick eyebrows. Besides, he has attractive personality. Not only he is kind of as a paterfamilias, but he is friendly. Either his children or grandchildren almost like more to gather with him than our mother when we come together in our home. Not only that, he is also kind of his friend. This matter can be seen by when he is in home, so many people comes to his home to have a chart to him. When he became a leader of BPD (Badan Pengurus Desa), he has good relationship to the subdistrict head, a leader of DPR or legistilative assembly and the regent of our regency. So our village’s helping is received well by them. He is not stingy father especially for me. When his children or grandchildren ask him some money to buy anything which they want, my father will give it as he still has it as. But, sometimes he shall be angry to his children or grandchildren who are asking money to him when he does not have it. Besides, my father is a hard worker. He always goes to garden of coffee almost every day to look for money to our need. Even though he is older now, but he is still spirit to work. This matter he does only to drive his children seem to the others.
Conclusion	:	My father is so kind of me. That is why I really admire to him. Not only he is kind of me, but he is kind to all of people who recognize him.