Something I wish I had

One day, I had something which really I wanted when I was in senior high school. That is special thing for me which can be used by multi-function. I always though it every once a week when I was creating a song in the weekend. “If I have a laptop today, I will be able to create a good song with the high quality” I wished in my heart. And I tried to become patient boy. Even though something I wanted was not in mine but I was still created several songs which was recorded by my bad mobile phone Nokia E71. The recording sound of it was good, but it was not as good as recording sound in laptop.
 

Someday, my friend visited my boarding house to borrow my guitar and he brought his laptop to show me new film by amir khan with the title “Taare zaamen par” or “every child is special”. I was really glad on that time because I can recorded one of my songs in his laptop. “Would you to tell me how to record song in your laptop?” I request him to teach me. “I am sorry boy, I can’t teach you about it. I just want to show you a new film today. If you want to be taught by me, you should understand how to program the computer and it is not easy. You should wait it next day ok!” My friend said to me. “Yeah, it’s okay! I can learn next time”. I said slowly. After we watched the film, he went to his home. I played the guitar with imagined when I had a laptop to record my song. The day by day had passed away, but I didn’t still have a laptop to record my song.

On 2014^th, I continued my studying in university of Metro. Some people called it the popular university especially in metro self. The name of the university is Muhammadiyah University of metro. I took English education in strata I there. In this university, I got a little difficult thing because the assignment of our lectures was should done by computer. But I hadn’t it yet again. When I wanted to do the assignment, I must stayed with my friend’s boarding house who had a computer in his room. I always did it almost every night. It was happen when I in the first semester.

Finally, when my father heard it, I was bought a laptop by him to do my assignments of my lectures. And now, I can record my all of songs in my laptop. I can do my assignment in my room without should stayed with my friend’s boarding house. I was really glad. “The last, my praying is brought into reality by Allah. Alhamdulillahirabil alamin!” I said in my heart. The thing which I wanted I had.

Analyze:

The title	:	Something I wish I had
Topic sentences	:	1.    I had something which really I wanted when I was in senior high school. 2.    My friend visited my boarding house to borrow my guitar and he brought his laptop to show me new film by amir khan with the title “Taare zaamen par” or “every child is special”. 3.    I continued my studying in university of Metro. 4.    when my father heard it, I was bought a laptop by him to do my assignments of my lectures.
Supporting sentence	:	That is special thing for me which can be used by multi-function. I always though it every once a week when I was creating a song in the weekend.

Generic structure
Orientation	:	One day, I had something which really I wanted when I was in senior high school. That is special thing for me which can be used by multi-function. I always though it every once a week when I was creating a song in the weekend. “If I have a laptop today, I will be able to create a good song with the high quality” I wished in my heart. And I tried to become patient boy. Even though something I wanted was not in mine but I was still created several songs which was recorded by my bad mobile phone Nokia E71. The recording sound of it was good, but it was not as good as recording sound in laptop.
Complication	:	Someday, my friend visited my boarding house to borrow my guitar and he brought his laptop to show me new film by amir khan with the title “Taare zaamen par” or “every child is special”. I was really glad on that time because I can recorded one of my songs in his laptop. “Would you to tell me how to record song in your laptop?” I request him to teach me. “I am sorry boy, I can’t teach you about it. I just want to show you a new film today. If you want to be taught by me, you should understand how to program the computer and it is not easy. You should wait it next day ok!” My friend said to me. “Yeah, it’s okay! I can learn next time”. I said slowly. After we watched the film, he went to his home. I played the guitar with imagined when I had a laptop to record my song. The day by day had passed away, but I didn’t still have a laptop to record my song. On 2014th, I continued my studying in university of Metro. Some people called it the popular university especially in metro self. The name of the university is Muhammadiyah University of metro. I took English education in strata I there. In this university, I got a little difficult thing because the assignment of our lectures was should done by computer. But I hadn’t it yet again. When I wanted to do the assignment, I must stayed with my friend’s boarding house who had a computer in his room. I always did it almost every night. It was happen when I in the first semester.
Resolution	:	Finally, when my father heard it, I was bought a laptop by him to do my assignments of my lectures. And now, I can record my all of songs in my laptop. I can do my assignment in my room without should stayed with my friend’s boarding house. I was really glad. “The last, my praying is brought into reality by Allah. Alhamdulillahirabil alamin!” I said in my heart. The thing which I wanted I had.