THE THIRD ASSIGNMENT OF WRITING 3

THE THIRD ASSIGNMENT OF WRITING 3

(Mr. Dedi Subandowo, M.Pd)

By:

Name	:	Bungsudi
SRN	:	12340014

1.    Give description on how to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion?

When we want to write the good text or paragraph, we should give attention to cohesion (to build consolidated and solid paragraph) and coherence (have related to each other) there to make perfect the paragraph. Cohesion was divided to be two forms such as: adequate cohesion and inadequate cohesion. To write the paragraph which has adequate and inadequate cohesion, we should make united form from the topic with main idea. The topic sentence must be explained by main idea and make a clear by supporting sentence.

2.    Tell more about cohesion?

Cohesion is a word or phrase which used to compare a word or phrase with other. And other side, cohesion also means to fuse or to know the word or phrase; what is it suitable or match with other or not. Cohesion means as place of sentences that arranged by consolidated and solid to result discourse (Tarigan, 1987:96). So, Cohesion in abstract can means consolidated of situation; unity in thinking; roundness in opinion.

3.    Write more about the difference between coherence and cohesion?

Cohesion means the paragraph which used to compare a word or phrase each other. And other side, cohesion also means to fuse or to know the word or phrase; what is it suitable or match with other or not. So, Cohesion in abstract be able to means consolidated of situation; unity in thinking; roundness in opinion.

And Coherence means present a relative sentence from each paragraph in descriptive text, so for each sentence must relate to the idea of the paragraph itself. The reader will be able to understand what we are describing of when the idea is clear and related each other.

4.    Show which text or sentence that shows adequate or inadequate cohesion on your paragraph by underlining or putting in the table?

In A Flash of My Life

I would like to describe about a flash of my life. Everything inside of me is just like a shadow which would never separate from my parents’ body. This shadow will always accompany for the rise of my life, every time and every where. So, welcome to my shadow.

My name is Bungsudi. I am a tall man around 178 cm who get lanky body, straight hair, point nose, and thick lip. My body looked like policeman who always managed the street every day. Some people said that I am good looking man to become cover model. But, it was before I got dreadful instance. I am a patient boy when I got a problem which was not too complicated. On other way, I liked to play guitar that drove me to make several song as heart expression. Actually my song genre always moved, sometime in Malay, Pop, Classic, and Alternative Pop. I am not good musician who always made bad song in listen. But, I always made a song when I got the free time even ever been every day be caused that was my hobby. I also really liked the awesome power point. Sometime, I used my time to make a good power point. But, until now I had not still had a good power point which had I made may be around 5-6 good power point in my mind. When some people used the free time to travel anywhere that they liked, I just made a song and power point.

Besides, I live in Ds. Lawang Agung Kecamatan Muaradua Kisam Kabupaten OKU Selatan or as usual was called Palembangness by Lampungness or in other place. I have two older brothers and one older sister and one younger sister there. All of my brothers and older sister had got married. So just still me and my young sister who had not yet. My village was so pleasant which was drowned round by beautiful hill. So many big trees there which were usual used to make a house. Besides, there are Air Panas or usual called Gembuhak by Villagers which beside of left there are two rivers flew which the rivers still natural. And there is one wonderful place which you had to visit. It was waterfall. There are several waterfall in my village depend on you which one will you visited first. As usual the strangers came in free day as like in after Idul Fitri or Idul Adha Party. My village will give a heart peace for everybody who visited it. All of those sights made me belong to home.

That’s all about a flash of my life. There is no too special in me. I am a man who live in village and like a music.

5.    You should explain why your text or sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion? 

Information	Paragraph
As introducing, this paragraph is included adequate cohesion because this paragraph has united in thinking among of sentences, word etc.	I would like to describe about a flash of my life. Everything inside of me is just like a shadow which would never separate from my parents’ body. This shadow will always accompany for the rise of my life, every time and every where. So, welcome to my shadow.
In this paragraphs have two cohesions. If we looked the sentence, so we will find that the sentences have united form to each other. But, the paragraph in contrast. The united form in the paragraph isn’t looked clear. So, this paragraphs are adequate cohesion and inadequate cohesion.	My name is Bungsudi. I am a tall man around 178 cm who get lanky body, straight hair, point nose, and thick lip. My body looked like policeman who always managed the street every day. Some people said that I am good looking man to become cover model. But, it was before I got dreadful instance. I am a patient boy when I got a problem which was not too complicated. On other way, I liked to play guitar that drove me to make several song as heart expression. Actually my song genre always moved, sometime in Malay, Pop, Classic, and Alternative Pop. I am not good musician who always made bad song in listen. But, I always made a song when I got the free time even ever been every day be caused that was my hobby. I also really liked the awesome power point. Sometime, I used my time to make a good power point. But, until now I had not still had a good power point which had I made may be around 5-6 good power point in my mind. When some people used the free time to travel anywhere that they liked, I just made a song and power point. Besides, I live in Ds. Lawang Agung Kecamatan Muaradua Kisam Kabupaten OKU Selatan or as usual was called Palembangness by Lampungness or in other place. I have two older brothers and one older sister and one younger sister there. All of my brothers and older sister had got married. So just still me and my young sister who had not yet. My village was so pleasant which was drowned round by beautiful hill. So many big trees there which were usual used to make a house. Besides, there are Air Panas or usual called Gembuhak by Villagers which beside of left there are two rivers flew which the rivers still natural. And there is one wonderful place which you had to visit. It was waterfall. There are several waterfall in my village depend on you which one will you visited first. As usual the strangers came in free day as like in after Idul Fitri or Idul Adha Party. My village will give a heart peace for everybody who visited it. All of those sights made me belong to home.
This paragraph is included adequate cohesion because this paragraph has united in thinking among of sentences, word etc. as conclusion, this paragraph has made clear about the text	That’s all about a flash of my life. There is no too special in me. I am a man who live in village and like a music.