Descriptive Paragraph "In A Flash of My Life"

Descriptive Paragraph

 1.      Give description on how to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate unity.

      Writing is one of basic Language. There are several texts in writing, descriptive is one. There is no  specific elaboration on what has to be included in a descriptive, however this means that it depends on what types of writing in paragraph or essay or even complex essay. If you are to write paragraph, it has to have three main components in the structure as described below:

     a)  Topic sentence

     b)    Supporting sentence

     c)    Concluding sentence

     d)   Logical development

2.      Tell more about coherence.

      Coherence means present a relative sentence from each paragraph in descriptive text, so for each sentence must relate to the idea of the paragraph itself. The reader will be able to understand what we are describing of when the idea is clear and related each other.

3.      Write your title

Title: “In A Flash about My Life”

4.      Identified by giving the different colors for Identification, and description. (Min 300 words).

In A Flash of My Life

I would like to describe about a flash of my life. Everything inside of me is just like a shadow which would never separate from my parents’ body. This shadow will always accompany for the rise of my life, every time and every where. So, welcome to my shadow.

My name is Bungsudi. I am a tall man around 178 cm who get lanky body, straight hair, point nose, and thick lip. My body looked like policeman who always managed the street every day. Some people said that I am good looking man to become cover model. But, it was before I got dreadful instance. I am a patient boy when I got a problem which was not too complicated. On other way, I liked to play guitar that drove me to make several song as heart expression. Actually my song genre always moved, sometime in Malay, Pop, Classic, and Alternative Pop. I am not good musician who always made bad song in listen. But, I always made a song when I got the free time even ever been every day be caused that was my hobby. I also really liked the awesome power point. Sometime, I used my time to make a good power point. But, until now I had not still had a good power point which had I made may be around 5-6 good power point in my mind. When some people used the free time to travel anywhere that they liked, I just made a song and power point.

Besides, I live in Ds. Lawang Agung Kecamatan Muaradua Kisam Kabupaten OKU Selatan or as usual was called Palembangness by Lampungness or in other place. I have two older brothers and one older sister and one younger sister there. All of my brothers and older sister had got married. So just still me and my young sister who had not yet. My village was so pleasant which was drowned round by beautiful hill. So many big trees there which were usual used to make a house. Besides, there are Air Panas or usual called Gembuhak by Villagers which beside of left there are two rivers flew which the rivers still natural. And there is one wonderful place which you had to visit. It was waterfall. There are several waterfall in my village depend on you which one will you visited first. As usual the strangers came in free day as like in after Idul Fitri or Idul Adha Party. My village will give a heart peace for everybody who visited it. All of those sights made me belong to home.

That’s all about a flash of my life. There is no too special in me. I am a man who live in village and like a music.

Note:

1.      The Red : Identification 2.      The Green : Description (Body Paragraph) 3.      The Blue : Concluding Paragraph